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Boohoo, i am not pretty today again.

Hhahahaha, again a new liquid in my caudron to make sad princes Sindrela!

Oh oof, , this big tree was hard to cut but I cut all with, axe.

Nobody look at me. I am not pretty. Only the Tompshon who look at and laugh.

Is that not too much evul ingrediaets ?
The soup really stink.

Hhahaha, . trust me, with what I will give Sindrella to drink you will be the most pretty. . H hahahahaha!

I must go this bread and the jamz at grandma before this night.

I must make no noise. I have to find what is the ingredients that that witch puts in her stinky juice.

Hhahaahaahaha, look at the color of the potion, as black as my hart ahaha hahaha!

Yuck, this is even worst that the one in morning.

I will put more burn hair so Sindrella will be more less pretty and not happy hahahHAhahaha!

Do you see Bob. There is a bird wit a blue shirt in th e tree.

Ah your right. I wonder were he finded the cheese that he eating.

HAHAhaha more burn hair hahaaha!

Hhahahaha, my recipe is even better. I will bring back everything on the dunjon and add this new potion evul to make Sindrella even more less pretty less happy. Haha.aha!

I feel sick my head hurts. I need a brake.

Someone is behind my plant it looks.Who are you. Dont be afraid i want to help.

No, I am not pretty person, cant help

Dont say that you can trust me. Tell me you story.

I follow the witch Thopmson to know the recipe of the potions. She makes me drink and I am less pretty always less.

Here take this.
My hairs are magic.
I belive in you.

Hhahahaha, look at little Sindrella who come back. Your still want to drink you did not look at you in the pond water ahahahah!

Why are you so mean.

Can i taste the potion please?

Hahahahahahha What!
Here take a big sip ahhhaahah!

Its working i feel it.

Where this light come from?

Aaaaaaaaaaaaah I cant see anything!

You see my hairs are magic for real.

I feel so much better! Thank you princes, I added your hairs in the potion and now I am like before!

You shine so much you made the witch blind!
Lets go celebrate in the cassle!

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Create an enchanted forest story!
You find yourself in a forest filled with trees, vegetation and animals of various sizes. As you venture into this unfamiliar forest, you'll notice things that aren't usually found in the woods: a superhero cape, a cow and a piglet, a medieval windmill, a giant robot, and more.
Have fun creating your own enchanted forest story using the objects and characters you find in the different categories!

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