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Create an enchanted forest story!
You find yourself in a forest filled with trees, vegetation and animals of various sizes.
As you venture into this unfamiliar forest, you'll notice things that aren't usually found in the woods: a superhero cape, a cow and a piglet, a medieval windmill, a giant robot, and more.
Have fun creating your own enchanted forest story using the objects and characters you find in the different categories!
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The not lucky princes
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Once a time there was a princes that luck not much. The name of the princes was Sindrella. Sindrella lived in village with magic caraters and the evul witch Mrs. Thompson
The nauty Tompson made Sindrella drink evul potions to make her less pretty and less happy. Also, in the , there is a goose who could speak words, a and a mister who cut trees with cloud. Sindrella had to do what the Thopson said , her do.
Boohoo, i am not pretty today again.
Hhahahaha, again a new liquid in my caudron to make sad princes Sindrela!
Oh oof, , this big tree was hard to cut but I cut all with, axe.
Nobody look at me. I am not pretty. Only the Tompshon who look at and laugh.
Is that not too much evul ingrediaets ?
The soup really stink.
Hhahaha, . trust me, with what I will give Sindrella to drink you will be the most pretty. . H hahahahaha!
I must go this bread and the jamz at grandma before this night.
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This is the night and the sky is full of star. Sindrella has follow Mr.s Tompson and her asistant at the village more far
Sindrella is hiding behind the wood house. She wants to know what is that Mrs. Thompso puts in the caudron.
This village, it is the village of Bob the pig. Bob lives in house with straw. His friend Richard the cat his he lives in a house with wood. Its him who build his house alone. The last village person is Maurice the bull. Maurice him, he live in a house of red brick.
Visitors small and strange are in the village this night too
I must make no noise. I have to find what is the ingredients that that witch puts in her stinky juice.
Hhahaahaahaha, look at the color of the potion, as black as my hart ahaha hahaha!
Yuck, this is even worst that the one in morning.
I will put more burn hair so Sindrella will be more less pretty and not happy hahahHAhahaha!
Do you see Bob. There is a bird wit a blue shirt in th e tree.
Ah your right. I wonder were he finded the cheese that he eating.
HAHAhaha more burn hair hahaaha!
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Its the morning. Sendrilla continued follow the witch and assistant without they see her.
She is now in front of the cassle of princes Roberta. Princes roberta is well know in the all villages. Her garden has gold eggs and dragon eggs. Ivan in gingerbread watches day and night to protect the eggs magic. Princes Roberta and king Jimmy-Carl say goodbye to cousin Elton. Elton really likes the purple. His shirt is purple. His hats is purple. His carridge is purple. Even his horse are purple.
Elton is left and the king goes inside for to rest. Princes Roberta see Sindrella hided behind the blue plants stuck on the cassle wall.
She goes close and Sindrella tell story. How she feel less pretty less happy. The Thompson witch gave evul potions and transformed like that.
Princes Roberta give her a piece of her beutiful gold hair. She tells to Sindrella that her hairs are magic also.
Sindrella go surprise the Thopmsom and assistant and asks if she can tastes what is in the caudron.
A surprise magic will transform her pretty and give the witch a leson.
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